Well, heck. I had a full page written about copy edits, how I’m angsting (like that word?) over how sucky the book is. I know it’s sucky because I’ve been sitting here blinking like crazy ever since I mailed Midnight’s Bride back to the editor. Then I decided to dump it for another theme.

What? No! Keep up with me please. I didn’t say I’d ditch the book. I meant the article. Now can you see why I worry all the time? What if I have paragraphs like the above in the manuscript and I didn’t catch them?

Oh, and did you read my profile on this page? It’s to the right under About the Author. Dang, I’m flighty today. More than usual, by the way. I’m feeling a little like that funky chicken on steroids at my web site. He’s down at the bottom of my About Me page at my website. Stare at him for a little bit and you’ll see he blinks. I love that guy. Heck, he has to be a guy. No self-respecting girl birdie would allow a bad feather day like that. He’s not really a chicken, by the way. He’s a gryphon, a creature with the head and wings of an eagle and the body of a lion. Some combination, huh?

Anyway, what I wanted to ask you is, “What do you think of this ‘high concept’ stuff?” In case you haven’t heard of it, it’s trying to condense a story idea down into about 20 words or less. If you’ve never tried it, it’s more frustrating than doing Soduko puzzles. Oh, that’s another blog I’d like to write about. Unfortunately, I only have tomorrow left, so we won’t have time for it.

I decided to try and write a high-concept for Masked Desires and Beloved Sacrifice. Here they are:

Masked Desires : Telekinetic monk subdues his demons until forced from the abbey to produce an heir.

Telekinetic monk subdues his demons until forced from the abbey to produce an heir.Beloved Sacrifice: Medieval Desperate Housewife drugs Braveheart to beget an heir, but once widowed, she’s the object of his revenge.

Sacrifice: Medieval Desperate Housewife drugs Braveheart to beget an heir, but once widowed, she’s the object of his revenge.Tell me what you think.

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